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To be a writer,
A true writer,
Is to live for a passion
that holds threats of
Inhabiting a cardboard box.

To be a writer,
Is to be in touch
with your unique spirit.
Whether it be
Imagination abound,
rhythmic and profound,
Or sorrowful and sappy,
A piece of you
Comes out in writing,
And brings that piece
From within others to life.

You spend hours,
To fill a tree’s worth
of notebooks,
Or an endless matrix
of word documents;
With chapter after chapter,
Stanza after stanza,
And then usually only savor
But few pages to
Let see the light of day.

You trip and toil over
Wounded muses,
Wording,
Style,
And anal grammar rules,
To produce
an offering of perspective
that helps others
to better see the world.

With every being,
Your mortal body decays,
Your immortal soul goes wherever they go,
And you are inevitably forgotten in this world.
Unless,
You’ve left pieces behind…
©2007-2009 *Day-Dreamer07
:iconday-dreamer07:

Author's Comments

I had this idea floating in my head for a while, and I wrote this when having nothing else to do after a physics final I stayed later for in school...

I hope to polish it later...but I figured the best way to start with that, is via your opinions..:nod:

EDIT:
This is also #100 on the writer's challenge: Dreams [link]

:star:EDIT DOS::star:
Okay, I'm very very glad that this has been so successful. I mean, 16 faves so far. Wow you guys, Thanks!:hug:

However, although it is now apparent that it is a decent poem, I still welcome your thoughts as to why you think so.
(Translation: PLEASE STOP FAVING THIS WITHOUT COMMENTING!!!!)

Have a lovely day. :heart:

Comments


:iconday-dreamer07:
...:blushes:

:glomp:

--
Wordsmith, Retail Associate, Americorps Volunteer,
PFS tutor, and Prevention specialist
looking to use her creative writing degree...creatively. :)

[link] ~ The Fresh Story
~Gemi-QuarianStock ~ Stock :D
:iconpimp-daddy:
very nice and u can do it u can be that person you can do anything i have seen what u can acomplish very good
:iconday-dreamer07:
........thanks.:)

--
Wordsmith, Retail Associate, Americorps Volunteer,
PFS tutor, and Prevention specialist
looking to use her creative writing degree...creatively. :)

[link] ~ The Fresh Story
~Gemi-QuarianStock ~ Stock :D
:iconk-red:
It's a great start. I love the imagry, mixing modern technological mediums with traditional methouds, as in thr line pertaining to Word.
Nice one!
:iconpyrobabe2010:
:boogie: very nice I like it :dance:
you forgot the part of
late night ponders
trying to write
but only getting bothered
by the wrods the refuse to flow
but you keep it up
till morning light
when sunrise shows
the beauty of life. :XD:

--
Alice came to a fork in the road and saw a Cheshire cat in a tree. "Which road do I take?" she asked. "Where do you want to go?" was his response. "I don't know," Alice answered. "Then," said the cat, "it doesn't matter."
-Lewis Carrol
:iconday-dreamer07:
wow...thanks, really.:) that means alot. You naile my intentions right on the head.:aww:

--
Wordsmith, Retail Associate, Americorps Volunteer,
PFS tutor, and Prevention specialist
looking to use her creative writing degree...creatively. :)

[link] ~ The Fresh Story
~Gemi-QuarianStock ~ Stock :D
:iconday-dreamer07:
nailed*^^;

--
Wordsmith, Retail Associate, Americorps Volunteer,
PFS tutor, and Prevention specialist
looking to use her creative writing degree...creatively. :)

[link] ~ The Fresh Story
~Gemi-QuarianStock ~ Stock :D
:iconday-dreamer07:
perhaps you can create your own interpretation...:XD:

--
Wordsmith, Retail Associate, Americorps Volunteer,
PFS tutor, and Prevention specialist
looking to use her creative writing degree...creatively. :)

[link] ~ The Fresh Story
~Gemi-QuarianStock ~ Stock :D

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